I have two haiku’s for the same prompt let me know which one you like better.
excited to see,
all that awaits beyond life!
what karma entails?
excited to know
what karma has kept in store
something nice maybe?
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*Stands and and abruptly interrupts the teacher.* I thought the Karma jet would’ve been here by now.
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Nice 👏
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we all are waiting in queue for that bus 🙂
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Noooooo buses are meanies *in my little kid voice. Lol, why can’t we drive?
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do u want to take the chopper maybe?
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YES PLEASE!!! Chopper motorcycle!!!
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Both are nice 🙂
Btw, raise you hand if you think karma bus is moving slow.. here, raising my hand 🙋🙋 😉😉
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haha thanks, this bus is crawling 🐌
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Yeh wala bus ka tyre toh khichad mein phas Gaya hai 😂😂😉
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I prefer to know what karma entails
Nice haiku, I find that it’s the most difficult form of poetry and yours are lovely so well-done 🤗💐
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂 hope ur having a great week
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Yes fair enough 😀 and you?
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I prefer the the second one. Well both were very thoughtful.
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Thanks for commenting.
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I prefer the second one..With hope that Karma holds something nice!
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True we all hope for that 🙂
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Both are good. But I liked the first one better!!
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Thanks Radhika 🙂
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I liked both. My choice is second one..I also liked the minion quote, karma bus is going slow😁😁
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thanks i love minions 🙂
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*Sits down and raises hand ✋ Teacher why do we have to ride the bus?… Buses suck!! 🚌
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I like both, but if I have to choose one, I’ll choose the first!
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waiting to see what karma entails 🙂
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Both are equally good, but my favorite is the second one 🙂
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Thanks Sree 🙂
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The meme is hilarious. Both haiku are good, but my favorite is the second. 😉
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Thanks 🙂
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